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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > Nevada

I am an investor based in Nevada. President of an international business and trade company for 19 years.

$100 to $300,000

United States > California

After relocating Tucson 20 years ago I have made equity investments in several technology-based early-stage companies. I relocated to San Diego two years ago where I am CEO of two biotech companies (Oncology and Dermatology)

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > California

30 years as a real estate investor for multifamily rehabs

$0 to $100,000,000

United States > Minnesota

My firm has helped raise over $200 million in non-dilutive capital for companies over the last 9 years. We specialize in finding cash grants from cities and states that are willing to invest in your product, idea and existing business as long as you move the labor intensive portion of your business to their city. In order for you to qualify you must be able to create 100 jobs over a 5 year period and be able to move the business to a state that is willing to invest in your company.

$500,000 to $100,000,000

United States > California

I invest in all kind of assets, stocks, real estate, commodities and also recently invested in 2 restaurants. I have 20 years of investment banking experience.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > California

Licensed Realtor since 1981 Worked with Angel investors to buy and hold properties Purchased 35 homes this year for investors. 30% below actual market value minimal to light repair (typical carpet and interior paint) Newer homes only 1980 to 2006 team of drivers drive and evaluate condition of homes, and contractors/ handymen for repair Avg purchase price is <$150k per property and I would like to purchase two at a time

$190,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

Former Electrical Engineer. Worked as product marketing engineer. Entrepreneur. Business owner. Would like a solid return on investment.

$1 to $300,000

United States > California

I am just starting out. I have been in retail management for over 15 years. I am interested in helping others achieve their goals and get a good return of. My money.

$100 to $10,000