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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

Netherlands > Naarden

We are an IT company from the Netherlands focusing on contracting, managed services and software development. With our venture lab for start-up ICT companies we are able to invest and provide support. We are looking for software/service related companies.

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

I am an investor looking at around $50,000 to start and up to $100,000. This is cash available looking for an interesting, probably upstart company with a good idea who needs money to get going. My preference would be an investment with good return that has the possibility of rolling back over into the company for future development and returns. As further background, I am looking to invest in areas other than stocks, funds, etc. My net worth is approximately 1.4 million of which most is in land in Arkansas.

$0 to $100,000

United States > California

Semi-retired former manager at Apple Computer, engineer with over 30 years experience in electronics and computer technology. Looking to invest in promising technologies.

$25,000 to $50,000

United States > California

I represent multiple financing entities and am always looking for good deals!

$5,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > California

I have bought, operated, and sold 6 businesses in my career. I am now an investor in small businessses because I understand them. I am looking for new opportunities to invest in.

$10,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I've owned 2 successful businesses in the past: one home improvements, and one entry door manufacturing/distributing. Also, I helped grow a very small manufacturing business grow to being one of the largest acrylic bathtub and shower wall manufacturer in North America. I personally sit on two non profit boards at the present time. Today, I am a director of sales for the one of the largest home improvement companies in the greater Sacramento area and a father of five children. I am a private investor.

$1,000 to $50,000

Brasil > Volta Redonda

I am a maintenance technician. I work for an oil and gas company. I'm looking for investment opportunities in US. Some years ago I owned an illumination company in Brazil with approx. 10 employees.

$100 to $25,000

United States > California

I am a private investor with nearly 20 years of executive experience in the digital entertainment industry, notably as Vice President and later Partner of **** Media & Entertainment Corp. Under my leadership, the company grew from $15M to $80M in annual revenue by navigating transformative market shifts, building proprietary ecosystems, and executing high-stakes strategic pivots. My investment history includes acquiring controlling shares from major stakeholders such as SEGA to lead a turnaround from near-bankruptcy. I bring deep expertise in team leadership, innovation management, and operational strategy. Currently based in Southern California, I’m continuing my professional development through UC Irvine’s International Business Operations program and actively exploring early-stage opportunities in healthtech and biotech. I operate independently, with a commitment to founder trust and long-term value creation.

$25,000 to $500,000