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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

India > NEW DELHI

Hi, education wise i am a post graduate from Indian Centre for International business having Specialisation in Marketing and Int. business As far as investments are concerned i have invested in many companies in various sectors like healthcare,Logistics,Infrastructure. The Healthcare company is into Imaging and Pathology and is based out of capital of india. Actively managed by Professionals in the industry.To extend the healthcare vertical i have also set up Eye care centre which is acting as a Integrated healthcare programme for Customers . In logistics we have warehousesat strategic locations and our own fleet of vehicles where we are doing transportation of varios car carrying companies and we have a interior designing company which is associated with reputed builders in india. I will be a private investor and have Experience of 10 yrs in healthcare. I will be able to offer expertiese in healthcare sector in terms of extensive experience basis the experience in india

$100,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I am a private investor. My professional background includes equity research (large and mid-cap stocks) at a private investment boutique, a position at the debt rating agency Moody's Investors Service, and most recently project finance with a focus on the renewable energy industry. I am a CFA charterholder. My career skills development has been oriented towards buy-side investing and I wish to employ these skills to put some of my own money to work.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > California

Private investor. Per Communication with interested party.

$0 to $40,000

United States > California

I have been investing in the stock market for a number of decades. I would like to participate in the arena of crowd funding to help the entrepreneur achieve their goal while achieving equity and high return on my investment.

$2,000 to $30,000

United States > California

I have worked with multinational corporations for over 30 years as an executive. I am a private investor looking for businesses that prefer passive investors.

$0 to $25,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I have access to multiple funds for investors who are interested in film and television projects. I deal with all types of investors on each project.

$0 to $20,000,000

United States > California

I am looking to invest in a company that will give me 30% return in investment over the course of 3 years. Looking for only serious entrepreneurs. Please contact with a business plan. Preferred in the Computer Technology Sales and or Support.

$100,000 to $2,500,000

United States > Texas

I have owned and run restaurants for over 20 years and more recently started several new businesses. Real estate is a sector of investment for me and I co-own an independent Oil Company in Texas where we buy, sell and operate Oil and Gas Leases.

$10,000 to $1,000,000