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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

We are intermediaries (rain makers) connecting people who have new ventures seeking funds with people who have funds seeking ways to leverage their investments. My background is financial services / wealth management, and as a result of doing this over the last 6 years I have amassed a substantial client and referral base. As a result of this network, everyday I get new projects crossing my desk. An example of a project that I lead to successful funding is Steven Cho - an LA based Internet Entrepreneur posted an idea for a Wireless service with distribution throughout the major hotels and airports of Australia. I contacted him through the Australian Investment Network and after a review of the opportunity I secured Ebsworth & Ebsworth (a major Australian Law Firm) on a Pro-Bono basis. I also had the company placed into the PriceWaterhouseCoopers CWEP program (Companies With Extraordinary Potential). I look forward to placing your opportunity. Sincerely

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Arizona

I have been in the financial services industry since 1985. I graduated from the University of North Dakota with a B.S. in Business Administration. I also minored in economics with additional concentration in real estate. I attended the UND Law School with course work in Commercial Law and Taxation. I have been helping business for over two decades, I have always tried to seek additional knowledge wherever possible. As a result, I have studied and has worked with worldwide economic development programs, federal grant programs and government loan guarantee programs.

$10,000 to $150,000

United States > California

We are a global holding company of Private Equity, foreign and domestic Funds in the business of deploying capital. Our Family of Funds have earned the reputation as a premier value added provider of capital. Our track record as an owner, lender and/or investor of real estate and securities has allowed us to create an unrivaled reputation for underwriting and understanding even the most complex of transactions. The firm is headquartered in Irvine, California and maintains offices throughout the US and internationally. In its principal and advising banking and investing capacity, focuses on providing financing for transactions in a wide range of corporate and real estate projects of all types, Including but not limited to, retail, entertainment, multi-family, industrial, office, hospitality, land, mobile home and mixed-use.

$1,000,000 to $20,000,000

United States > Georgia

Partner with Global capital funding firm. We have access to several funds...looking for mid to mature companies , with ebitda of 500,000, who are seeking funding.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > California

I have owned or invested in a number of businesses and real estate for over 30 years. Looking to invest and advise on new opportunities.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > California

I am just starting out. I have been in retail management for over 15 years. I am interested in helping others achieve their goals and get a good return of. My money.

$100 to $10,000

United States > Massachusetts

I am a Chartered accountant from India with 10 years experience in senior management in large companies around the world and have run my own IT services business for the past 25 years . Has done well and the company and myself have excess funds want to invest and take part time active role to help manage growth .

$500,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Texas

I have been in the industry for more than 15 years. I have managed several start ups with millions of dollars in net worth.

$500,000 to $5,000,000