California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > Georgia

We provide needed capital for project principals with solid business plans and a strong team. It is our desire to work with projects that will positively impact the local economy. Projects and business ventures are given a thorough and realistic evaluation to ascertain their viability for funding. We are interested in retaining an equity position in the project/business ventures we would finance. Our focus is on commercial and residential real estate development projects (including resorts and mixed use developments), restaurants, historic building renovations (castles and such like), private aviation ventures and global village projects. We would also invest in existing businesses that are in distress and in need of capital to grow, including manufacturing, retail and the service industry sectors. Feel free to submit these types of projects for possible funding considerations.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

United States > California

My investment history is in real estate and stocks, I purchased my 1st home in 2017 in Arizona, and made 40% profit on it in 3 years. I then used those profits and invested in a 2nd home in San Diego. I have been investing in stocks and maintaining a 15% yearly rate of return, and have recently heavily invested in crypto currencies.

$1,000 to $75,000

United States > California

Starter entrepreneur looking into investing in business and companies.

$1 to $5,000

United States > California

Software engineer looking into investing cash with % partnership in a recent start up. I am willing to spent some time helping to manage business matters,once partnered. We can talk more about details in person.

$25,000 to $50,000

United States > California

Just starting to invest. Am a member of an investor networking group in my area. Have been in government for many years. I am a private investor and lender that also belongs to a group.

$100 to $75,000

Estonia > Tallinn

I am a private investor looking to fund inspiring businesses in California, US. I plan to live permanently in LA starting from 2012/2013 and assume involvement in the strategic or every-day management of investee businesses. I have long term experience from investment banking industry in Europe. It makes me confident that I can contribute a huge deal to your venture by advising on business strategy and financial managementin addition to providing the necessary capital.

$10,000 to $200,000

United States > Florida

I have an extensive investment banking and entrepreneurial background looking for companies looking for money with rapid growth potential and interested in a liquidity event within three years.

$15,000 to $100,000

United States > California

I started out in advertising in NYC, then moved to Los Angeles to pursue acting where I landed a job on Star Trek: Enterprise, then started flipping houses in los Angeles. Took that money and invested with a trader in the stock market and he lost a million dollars. Now, am interested in rebuilding up to the million again with $100,000 initially as a private investor.

$5,000 to $100,000