California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

I am an accomplished data scientist who has consulted with both public and private sector industries looking to provide data-driven, strategic advisory directorship to a micro to small company between startup and growth phases.

$1 to $10,000

United States > Georgia

I am a private investor looking for the right opportunity for passive income outside of my current ventures. I have funded startups in the technology, entertainment, and telecom industries. I also have 10 years of executive experience in telecommunications industry.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

FMCG executive with 25 years in the retail and food-service sectors. Looking for investment/partnership for the right product(s) to take to market. Interested in Food, Beverage, Cosmetic, Skin Care.

$100 to $100,000

United States > California

New to Investing, appreciation for startups. Background with Military, State Government, and Municipal Government. Private Investor.

$1,000 to $20,000

United States > California

12 years in corporate finance, have started 3 ventures myself and funded three others. As a Private Investor, I love entrepreneeurship and want to help others starting ventures.

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

I have an extensive background and over 25 years of leadership experience in the IT industry, government and military, working at the director through c-suite level running businesses and the senior officer level in the military. I have experience as an entrepreneur in various sized companies, at all levels of leadership, in both the technology and financial services fields. I am looking for solid investments with motivated entrepreneurs, who can demonstrate a well thought out plan and have shown success.

$100 to $20,000

United States > South Carolina

We are a technology-empowered provider that has worked with over 200,000 businesses across the United States. We take a personal approach with lending, and make sure our customers receive the highest level of support to identify a debt financing solution to help grow their business. Our simplified process enables users to receive the fastest loan decisions at the lowest rates with the least amount of hassle by streamlining the application process. We focus on the health of the business today; rather than traditional metrics and personal financial statements evaluated by financial institutions. If you meet the following criteria, than we have a solution for you: 1+ years in business $100k+ in annual revenue $2,000+ average bank balance 500+ FICO Few to zero NSFs/negative days

$0 to $1,000,000

United States > California

Invested in a Battery Manufacturer company in China, and currently as a consultant for the company. My family is operating multiple businesses in various industries, including Real estate, Cloth manufacturer, machinery manufacturer, etc. My background and knowledge will give good support to my partners. I am open to invest into potential businesses starting from 100k to 1 million. I am currently on a business trip in China, the best way to get in touch with me will be email.

$100,000 to $1,000,000