California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

Former Electrical Engineer. Worked as product marketing engineer. Entrepreneur. Business owner. Would like a solid return on investment.

$1 to $300,000

United States > California

HR executive working and living currently in Mexico City, doing business in San Diego, CA. Planning to relocate permanently to San Diego, CA and investing there as active or silent partner. Private investor, entrepreneur, currently investing in different areas such as Internet, TV production, Imports, Packaging, etc. in Mexico, Germany and Spain.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > California

We are a non-profit international organization dedicated to enhancing business cooperation and cultural communication between China and the United States. For the past six years, we developed into the biggest non-governmental platform with a membership of over 3000 Chinese entrepreneurs and more than 600 American entrepreneurs. We not only host annual summits designed to connect Chinese investors and local professionals to help them find business and real estate projects in the U.S., but also provide business matchmaking services for enterprises in both nations.

$0 to $10,000,000

United Arab Emirates > Dubai

An Expert in Telecom industry, more than 22 years in managerial and consulting for big operators and suppliers of the industry and all my expertise is in Middle East and Africa. As reference: France Telecom, IDEMIA, Siemens.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > California

Private investor with 5 years commercial real estate investment experience purchasing parking lots, garages, self storage, & industrial outdoor storage. Received recognition for parking lot investments and programs. Member of the Commercial Real Estate investment group. Access to over $150 million in capital from three sources.

$1 to $500,000

United States > California

I have an extensive background and over 25 years of leadership experience in the IT industry, government and military, working at the director through c-suite level running businesses and the senior officer level in the military. I have experience as an entrepreneur in various sized companies, at all levels of leadership, in both the technology and financial services fields. I am looking for solid investments with motivated entrepreneurs, who can demonstrate a well thought out plan and have shown success.

$100 to $20,000

United States > California

I am a private investor looking for capital requirements in the $5,000 to $100,000 range. My backgrouund is in real estate financing but I'm open to look at other projects. If the deal makes sense and the risks are carefully weighed, I'm ready to get you funded. I always keep an open mind and I'm ready to review your proposal. All the best.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > Washington

My main goal is to invest in companies that are struggling through that intermediate phase of development. I lived through several high growth companies that I owned and recognize the need for capital without losing control. I am a CEO of a high tech firm and sit on the board of a few small companies. I am a private investor.

$5,000 to $50,000