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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

My investment history is in real estate and stocks, I purchased my 1st home in 2017 in Arizona, and made 40% profit on it in 3 years. I then used those profits and invested in a 2nd home in San Diego. I have been investing in stocks and maintaining a 15% yearly rate of return, and have recently heavily invested in crypto currencies.

$1,000 to $75,000

United States > California

I co-founded Micro Center Computer Inc in 1990 and was a board member of Supermicro Computer which went to a successful IPO in 2007. Now Sam is focused on start-up company and investment. Sam has over 30 years of extensive background in development, engineering and business management and has been a successful engineer/manager/consultant/executive in several well- respected companies such as Sony, Fairchild, Telesensory, and Snap-on Diagnostics.

$20,000 to $300,000

United States > California

Real Estate Investor specializing in JV deals and hospitality.

$1 to $10,000,000

United States > Hawaii

We are looking to fund diversified projects across the world. We have a group of investors that can fund 20 million to 1 billion per transaction. We are a Investment and Development Company based out of Honolulu Hawaii, US. We are a small company listed in B.B.B with no overhead and NO Debts. Our process is simple and quick we send you the key document's to fill out send back to us within 24 hours. You could possibly have your LOI within 5-7 business day's. Please only contact us if your serious about making millions, and can provide the necessary documentations. Key Documents I will send to you upon Contact! 1 NCND- Form 2 Business Summary Intake form

$200,000,000 to $2,000,000,000

United States > California

Novice investor (have invested in stocks, bonds, etc). Small business owner runs an entertainment company in Los Angeles. Private investor.

$100 to $50,000

United States > Illinois

we provides financing and management assistance primarily to small and medium enterprises (SMEs) through factoring in california and internationally. The company offers various factoring services, including international factoring, recourse factoring, non-recourse factoring, maturity factoring, indirect factoring, and full factoring, as well as financing for SMEs. It also involves in various leasing activities comprising nautical leasing, property leasing, equipment leasing, and vehicle leasing. In addition, the company provides Rendimax, an online savings account. It also serves large enterprises, business people, and private individuals.

$200,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Illinois

Work for one of the largest privately held real estate companies in the country.

$50,000,000 to $750,000,000

United States > Florida

As the CEO/Founder/Primary Investor: Nutherm International, Inc., King City Construction, LLC; Shenanigans Steaks and Seafood; Planned Maintenance Systems, Inc.; The Rogers Building LP Accredited Investor: Digital Heathcare, Inc.; DayStar Oil and Gas, Inc.; Wilt's Clean Energy, Inc.; The Levoi Organization, Corp. Have taken my experience in building new companies to investing in solid start-ups in a variety of industries. Former president of florida business incubator association; 30 years investment experience.

$250,000 to $10,000,000