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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

Working in the software industry for more than 13 years. Worked with start- ups and large internet equipment manufactures like Cisco Systems, etc. Have extensive experience in Business Modeling, Software Development and SDLC.

$100 to $25,000

Canada > Markham

I am a mechanical engineer with over 20 years of engineering and management experience in manufacturing, automotive, and construction projects. I would like to invest in a business and support it to grow.

$1,000 to $2,000,000

India > NEW DELHI

Hi, education wise i am a post graduate from Indian Centre for International business having Specialisation in Marketing and Int. business As far as investments are concerned i have invested in many companies in various sectors like healthcare,Logistics,Infrastructure. The Healthcare company is into Imaging and Pathology and is based out of capital of india. Actively managed by Professionals in the industry.To extend the healthcare vertical i have also set up Eye care centre which is acting as a Integrated healthcare programme for Customers . In logistics we have warehousesat strategic locations and our own fleet of vehicles where we are doing transportation of varios car carrying companies and we have a interior designing company which is associated with reputed builders in india. I will be a private investor and have Experience of 10 yrs in healthcare. I will be able to offer expertiese in healthcare sector in terms of extensive experience basis the experience in india

$100,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I have been involved in commercial real estate projects for over 3 years. This includes recreational / resort properties, multi family, retail and mixed use projects. I am willing to look at fully or partially developed projects. I have also been involved with mining projects and oil and gas reserves and have access to a number of JV partners looking to invest in ground assets. I have a corporate background in senior management and through my consulting background have worked with many different industry sectors and companies from small family owned to Fortune 500.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

25 YEARS IN THE MUSIC BUSINESS MANAGING AND INVESTING IN ARTIST CAREERS AND NOW LOOKING FOR NEW OPPORTUNITIES TO INVEST IN.

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New Mexico

Managing Director for the a investment fund since 1991. Funded primarily manufacturing companies in the $5,000,000 to $250,000,000 range, but will look at anything.

$50,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

Our firm been investing equity in profitable, established businesses for almost 40 years. Particularly, Companies seeking growth capital or Owner's seeking to sell a portion of their business for liquidity or estate planning purposes. Investments are typically in companies with $3MM-$15MM in EBITDA. We seek to partner and grow businesses, typically making an acquisition within the first 12 month's of acquiring a business, while also developing a strategy for further organic growth of a business. We are generalists and look at areas such as manufacturing, industrials, specialty chemicals, business services, auto, aviation, unique consumer products, and specialty contractors with low bonding requirements.

$3,000,000 to $15,000,000

United States > New York

I am a financial consultant for several small firms and throughout the years, I've assisted these firms in securing additional capital funding for various needs (i.e. expansion, refinance, equity draw, etc.) I represent a fundraising group for start-up companies as well as existing corporations seeking to expand their capital. We can work with companies eager to raise capital through regulation crowd funding and filing all SEC forms and regulations. Raise anywhere from $20,000 - $5M. We charge NO upfront costs, only 4% fee if your fundraise is successful. We offer free contracts and personal support throughout. My occupational background is as an accountant/financial advisor for the past 20 years including 10 years as a corporate controller. I am also a real estate investor and currently own and manage four investment properties under my real estate corporation.

$20,000 to $500,000,000