California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

Serial Entrepenuer. Entrepenuer in Residence UCSD Connect San Diego. Last company was sold to VC funded competitor. Several current investments in private companies including my current company. Private investor & member of a small private group of investors.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

Our firm been investing equity in profitable, established businesses for almost 40 years. Particularly, Companies seeking growth capital or Owner's seeking to sell a portion of their business for liquidity or estate planning purposes. Investments are typically in companies with $3MM-$15MM in EBITDA. We seek to partner and grow businesses, typically making an acquisition within the first 12 month's of acquiring a business, while also developing a strategy for further organic growth of a business. We are generalists and look at areas such as manufacturing, industrials, specialty chemicals, business services, auto, aviation, unique consumer products, and specialty contractors with low bonding requirements.

$3,000,000 to $15,000,000

United States > California

I'm a private investor, been at the same job for over 19 years, saved up some money and would like to invest in a small business. Can't leave my current job until the investment subsidizes my current income. I'm open to all offers and willing to negotiate.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > California

I have worked with multinational corporations for over 30 years as an executive. I am a private investor looking for businesses that prefer passive investors.

$0 to $25,000

United Kingdom > Brighton, Sussex

Training, heavy experience in business and finance world.

$70,000 to $200,000

United States > California

I manage a Real Estate Private Equity Fund. All investors and the fund are accredited. We invest in Real Estate projects only...development or renovation, etc. We are looking for min. 20% annual returns. We are in our sixth year of operation.

$50,000 to $300,000

United States > Florida

As the CEO/Founder/Primary Investor: Nutherm International, Inc., King City Construction, LLC; Shenanigans Steaks and Seafood; Planned Maintenance Systems, Inc.; The Rogers Building LP Accredited Investor: Digital Heathcare, Inc.; DayStar Oil and Gas, Inc.; Wilt's Clean Energy, Inc.; The Levoi Organization, Corp. Have taken my experience in building new companies to investing in solid start-ups in a variety of industries. Former president of florida business incubator association; 30 years investment experience.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I am a motivated entrepreneur that has had success in real estate development and other various construction industries. I have recently gone into an early retirement, focusing my time and efforts in sourcing passive investment opportunities. Primarily I have focused my business ventures in Southern California, but I am looking to expand my investment portfolio from simply domestic real estate investments to international markets. I am interested in getting in touch with entrepreneurs that have found niche markets for real estate development, even in the downturn in the global economy. Ilook forward to hearing about the opportunities that are out there.

$50,000 to $250,000