California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

Progressive thinking investor looking to assist start-ups that have new and innovative ideas. Can bring practical business experience and expertise to the table in a variety of disciplines; real estate, financing, financial planning and projection, real estate leasing and construction, labor management, human relations, systems and procedures, advertising, marketing, and promotional activities. Have made angel investments in over 30 companies. Also have a network of other investors.

$25,000 to $300,000

United States > California

Experience investing in early stage startups. CPA. Prior experience at Ernst & Young, LLP, public REIT and private equity firm.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Austria > Graz

15+ General Manager in small and medium size companies Development and successful exit of start ups

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

We are a forum who are currently looking for projects that need Round A or B investments.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > California

My experience has predominantly been in strategy consulting. I am looking to make a relatively hands-off private investment, and have not made any investments to date.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > California

Thus far I have invested only in my own ventures. In the past 10 years, I have started three organizations. The first was sold to a public company, the second was shut down and I am currently running the third. I am interested in hearing about new opportunities for investment from aspiring entrepreneurs.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > Washington

I am a Consultant for Private Capital Consulting. I help provide funding for Commercial Real Estate, Intellectual Property Projects, Transportation, Entertainment, Biotech, Medical, Franchises, Land Development, Technology, Energy, Alternative Energy, Green Earth Projects,Business Growth Projects, and most other projects not listed. We fund projects directly or use other direct funding sources available to us. We have provided funding for hundreds of projects for companies around the world. Since 2000 we have facilitated over 40 Billion USD. Very few companies have the domestic and foreign resources that are available to us. I can connect you to private money sources that want to invest in solvent projects with solid principals. Our funding sources have closed billions in transactions and range from private individuals to large corporations. We service these sources and facilitate for them.

$500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I am based in California. I am an economics major with an MBA and several years of business management experience. I work in the Financial insurance industry with a reputed private company. I am open to different sort of investments in various sectors. I am mostly an individual investor. My main investments are in commercial real estate and construction.

$70,450 to $3,500,500