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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > Arizona

Former consulting engineer; former commodities professional trader; private investor with some partners. Looking for wind-fall profits resulting from providing financial assistance at crucial time for mineral production companies.

$0 to $500,000

United States > California

I have been involved in commercial real estate projects for over 3 years. This includes recreational / resort properties, multi family, retail and mixed use projects. I am willing to look at fully or partially developed projects. I have also been involved with mining projects and oil and gas reserves and have access to a number of JV partners looking to invest in ground assets. I have a corporate background in senior management and through my consulting background have worked with many different industry sectors and companies from small family owned to Fortune 500.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I have access to multiple funds for investors who are interested in film and television projects. I deal with all types of investors on each project.

$0 to $20,000,000

United States > California

Our firm works directly with multiple funding sources as consultants and qualified referral agents bringing capital to developers worldwide at 4% interest. We work in close association with multiple funding sources, private Investors to review business projects seeking funding from $3 M USD to 10 Billion USD and liaison between project principals and funders. Which is offered at 100% financing for your project needs at 4% interest. Plus we offer a Business Loan to Businesses at 4% interest.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > California

Launched angel investment career in 2000 with idea sold to 4 private professional services companies; took the unified group public on NASDAQ; used stock to acquire & roll-up 28 other companies; moved to NYSE; sold 28/32 companies 36 months later. Joined three start-ups with idea, hired >100 people; raised $10MM from private, high-net worth individuals & small funding groups. Moved into legal & finance field in forensics and led the growth of 5 companies, with target strategy of selling to Private Equity firms; accomplished PE sale and moved back to consulting; private investing in 2013.

$5,000 to $250,000

United States > Illinois

I have created nine internet companies of my own from the ground up, made them very successful, and collect massive revenue from each business on a regular basis. I have extensive experience with online advertising and product development, manufacturing, and distribution, along with business construction. I enjoy start-up businesses that are mainly just ideal concepts and aren't really established quite yet, for it really allows me to help the creator or creators expand on their ideas and improve their project. I own my own web development/marketing and promotion firm, I am in charge of directing the entire company and handling it's success, I have quite the experience with controlled investing.

$2,000 to $50,000

United States > California

Private investor providing convertible debt financing secure or unsecure, lines of credit for development construction and or inventory along with crowdfunding options. We can provide a strong legal and development team to help structure your venture. Investments are based on the business or venture, principles board or advisors. All ventures welcome, particularly interested in businesses that involve real estate, home flipping, new development or construction or projects associated with crypto and block chain development.

$10,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Georgia

I have been investing for approx. 5 years now and have a high success rate. I have started and sold three business and tremendous profit in the past 15 years. I am a private investor

$500,000 to $5,000,000