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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

I am a private investor with little investment history. I am an entertainer who wants to branch out and seek new opportunities.

$30,000 to $100,000

Brasil > Volta Redonda

I am a maintenance technician. I work for an oil and gas company. I'm looking for investment opportunities in US. Some years ago I owned an illumination company in Brazil with approx. 10 employees.

$100 to $25,000

United States > California

27 year SVP commercial banker with prior business ownership / management experience. Private investor seeking established, growing and profitable business model.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > California

Novice investor (have invested in stocks, bonds, etc). Small business owner runs an entertainment company in Los Angeles. Private investor.

$100 to $50,000

United States > California

I have been investing in the stock market for a number of decades. I would like to participate in the arena of crowd funding to help the entrepreneur achieve their goal while achieving equity and high return on my investment.

$2,000 to $30,000

United Arab Emirates > abu dhbai

We are an investment group that invests in companies that have our concept in business. We are located in the Middle East, Abu Dhabi / UAE.

$20,000 to $20,000

Ireland > Dublin

We were born out of a technology company that specializes in cloud software and web technologies. We've the hindsight of bringing products to market and love looking at new ventures with a view to making investment. .

$100,000 to $500,000

United States > Georgia

I serve as Managing Partner of a private equity business catalyst focused on financing existing ventures in the High Technology, Commercial Real Estate, Manufacturing, and Consumer Goods industries. Clients include: Apple, Inc, Applied Economics, Marcus & Millichap, Dillon Read Venture Capital, Transamerica Corporation, First Ag, Accelerated Marketing Partners, New Media Magazine, United Parcel Service, AT&T, FIFA/World Cup Soccer, Panoz Auto Development Corporation, Frost Motorsports, JRG Capital, Smash Media, East West Resort Development Corporation, Opinicon, Inc., Spirit Creek Development, Alemax Corporation, Pete's Brewing Company, and New World Beverages Corporation.

$20,000,000 to $1,000,000,000