California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > New Jersey

I am a private investor and have been involved in investing in equities/stocks over the last 3-4 years. Have been managing a team of a dozen people over the last 4-5 years in a financial organization.

$10,000 to $25,000

United States > Wyoming

Founder of D**** Infotech, Inc. I have 20 years experience in Sales and Marketing. Interested in investing or merger of the company with suitable partners.

$50,000 to $100,000

United States > California

My primary practice is in energy and government finance law. I have experience in sophisticated financial transactions including energy commodity transactions and interest rate swaps. I have experience in high value securitization of government assets including the sale and development of new electrical generation.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > California

Private Investor who currently is the VP of Mergers and Acquisitions of a successful manufacturing company. Over the past years we have made several acquisitions as add-ons to our company and we are looking to expand our portfolio. Am also an active investor in the stock and bond markets as well as the residential and commercial real estate markets.

$0 to $15,000,000

United States > California

I have purchased one greentech company and looking to expand into other areas of the industry. I bring 15+ years experience in greentech, energy, and start-up companies. Experience as a group investor.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > California

Corporate Finance Executive with 15 years of experience in fortune 500 corporations across process manufacturing, distribution, software (SaaS) and services industries. Six Sigma master black belt (process improvement) with expertise in sustained working capital improvement initiatives. Deep short-term and long-term financial planning and analysis across entire P&L. Seeking opportunity to be hands-on and engaged equity partner in a small business. I am a Private Investor.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > California

Private investment broker with my own brokerage. We have a diverse investment pool looking for OFF MARKET opportunities, development opportunities, fix and flip residential or commercial. We also have a multitude of investment opportunities that we offer to investors outside our brokerage as well. We move quickly and can show POF to perform on any given asset acquisition we may be interested in. With over 30 years experience in residential and commercial investing, we welcome the opportunity to expand our investor network and investment opportunities.

$100,000 to $25,000,000

United States > Virginia

I have invested in many companies over the years. Won some and lost on several but it is a numbers game. I look for strong management teams that listen to advisors well and know their marketplace. I also try to bring value to companies I invest in by helping companies identify and utilize leverage, build momentum in their marketplace and position the entities to maximize strategic resource and capital channels within the public markets if / when it makes sense.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000