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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > New York

Private investor.

$0 to $100,000

United States > California

I am a private investor looking for capital requirements in the $5,000 to $100,000 range. My backgrouund is in real estate financing but I'm open to look at other projects. If the deal makes sense and the risks are carefully weighed, I'm ready to get you funded. I always keep an open mind and I'm ready to review your proposal. All the best.

$5,000 to $100,000

Hong Kong > Hong Kong

We aim to provide seed financing, hands-on leadership, market strategy and operational guidance to early-stage technology companies with a focus on IT service, consumer product, internet security, manufacturing and technology enablers.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Michigan

We offer emerging growth companies or small and medium size enterprises (“SME’s”) proprietary capitalization advisory services in the form of a License Agreement which provides SME’s a turn-key solution to proactively and successfully complete a private placement of securities and acquire investors for their own enterprise. The license allows those SME’s to offer their investors a principal protected unit with flexible liquidity options that mitigate their downside risk. We also acquire controlling interest in public companies with the objective of restructuring them to merge with private companies who are seeking to go public. We also acquire controlling interests in private companies with the intent of expanding them with blue chip management teams and synergistic rollup acquisitions.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

I am a business owner with 10 plus years of active experience and I am now starting out as angle investor. I have a keen understanding of what small businesses need to succeed and I am willing to get involved with the right entrepreneur.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > California

Investment History: I seek quality investment based on practical business plans within sectors that compliment my personal background. I have made 1 other investment in a start up technology company. Ocupational background: I have a background in finance, and I now own a renewable energy company. I am a private investor.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > Arizona

Participated in several start up ventures primarily in the media and educational sectors. Currently based in Southern California, with business office in Arizona. My occupational background is in the financial sector. I am a private investor.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > California

I currently runs a consultancy and fund focused on idea-stage ventures. I have founded multiple companies that have raised seed, angel, and/or venture capital, and provided significant returns to investors: My investor experience includes a position as the Entrepreneur- in-Residence at a NYC venture firm, and personal investments in multiple start-ups.

$25,000 to $100,000