California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

Private, young, new inverstor looking for businesses to invest in that makes sense. Administrator for CA Board and Care, currently operating 3 locations and consulting for 3 facilities in Santa Monica.

$5,000 to $20,000

United States > Colorado

I am in the military and am a private investor who is looking for sound investments.

$2,000 to $100,000

United States > Illinois

More than 18 years of commercial real estate investment and development experience. Most recently VP at GE Real Estate Purchase single tenant office and industrial properties for my company's own account and commercial and hotel properties for other investors for whom I am an advisor.

$50,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

An accomplished business executive who has built a successful career progressing through the operations and sales roles in startup and fast-growth companies. Recognized by my peers for my ability to create and implement an organizational vision that produces dramatic, yet controlled, growth in revenue and profitability.

$10,000 to $150,000

United States > Connecticut

I am a life long entrepreneur with many ties to the Angel community via legislation etc. I have owned businesses in wholesale/retail, hospitality and real estate and new media. I have also consulted to business's in health care and energy. My strenghs lie in marketing and sales, however, I am also very good at conceptualizing business and decision making. I have some very strong ties to the SBA program over a specific lender . My passion for small business has evolved to include my involvement on a national basis with the boards of WIPP< WBENC and the US Chamber council on small business

$40,000,000 to $10,000,000

Mexico > Zapopan

Investment history: My family company has invested in the automotive, mining, and real estate industries since 1934. IThrough the 1970's we had a network of 5 Ford dealerships and 2 calcium hydroxide mines. In the 1980's we started developing real estate and have built over 300 housing and commercial units in 5 states in Mexico. Recently we have started an Investment company that provided capital for a new company in the emergency and defence industry. We are now expanding worldwide with offices in the U.S. and Colombia, selling mainly to the U.S. Deppartment of State through the National Security Agency. That was our first angel investment experience and we are looking for new opportunities. We are headqueartered in Guadalajara, Mexico, with offices in Oregon, USA and Bogotá, Colombia.

$100,000 to $500,000

United States > California

I'm a private investor, been at the same job for over 19 years, saved up some money and would like to invest in a small business. Can't leave my current job until the investment subsidizes my current income. I'm open to all offers and willing to negotiate.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > California

Background in wholesaling and fix and flip SFR properties In California. I now work with a group of lenders that lends to Corporations, General Partnerships, Limited Partnerships, Limited Liability Companies, and Revocable Trusts. We offer flexible bridge loans combined with gap funding with a simple and transparent application process, reliable funding, and predictable pricing to achieve 100% financing for your fix and flip real estate investment project. The bridge loan, referred to as PRIME loan, is a short-term mortgage for real estate investors, who prefer to finance the purchase and/or rehabilitation of their investment property rather than buy fully in cash. The PRIME loan is the cornerstone delivering up to 90% of the cost for your fix and flip project. GAP funding, or gap financing, is used in combination with the PRIME loan as an interim, unsecured loan to finance the additional 10%, or more, to cover down payments, closing costs and reserve requirement.

$75,000 to $4,000,000