California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

I am a private investor seeking to help others grow their business. Have a background in investments, accounting and finance. Seeking equity investments only.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > California

I am interested in industrial and energy investments.

$100,000 to $500,000

United States > California

Private, young, new inverstor looking for businesses to invest in that makes sense. Administrator for CA Board and Care, currently operating 3 locations and consulting for 3 facilities in Santa Monica.

$5,000 to $20,000

United States > California

Launched angel investment career in 2000 with idea sold to 4 private professional services companies; took the unified group public on NASDAQ; used stock to acquire & roll-up 28 other companies; moved to NYSE; sold 28/32 companies 36 months later. Joined three start-ups with idea, hired >100 people; raised $10MM from private, high-net worth individuals & small funding groups. Moved into legal & finance field in forensics and led the growth of 5 companies, with target strategy of selling to Private Equity firms; accomplished PE sale and moved back to consulting; private investing in 2013.

$5,000 to $250,000

United States > Arizona

I have been in the financial services industry since 1985. I graduated from the University of North Dakota with a B.S. in Business Administration. I also minored in economics with additional concentration in real estate. I attended the UND Law School with course work in Commercial Law and Taxation. I have been helping business for over two decades, I have always tried to seek additional knowledge wherever possible. As a result, I have studied and has worked with worldwide economic development programs, federal grant programs and government loan guarantee programs.

$10,000 to $150,000

United States > California

We are a non-profit international organization dedicated to enhancing business cooperation and cultural communication between China and the United States. For the past six years, we developed into the biggest non-governmental platform with a membership of over 3000 Chinese entrepreneurs and more than 600 American entrepreneurs. We not only host annual summits designed to connect Chinese investors and local professionals to help them find business and real estate projects in the U.S., but also provide business matchmaking services for enterprises in both nations.

$0 to $10,000,000

United Arab Emirates > Dubai

12 years of experience in Financial/Banking sector of UAE. Currently a Mergers & Acquisition analyst.

$50,000 to $60,000

United States > Florida

My name is Carl Nicks. I'm 28 years old. I've been a professional athlete going on 7 years. I have a pretty good portfolio but really want to diversify it and hopefully join some of you in lucrative business opportunities. I won't act like I am a Shark from the tv show Shark Tank I do have common sense and I wouldn't be where I am without a little smarts. If u want to take your business to the next level or need some capital to get started I would be glad to listen.

$10,000 to $1,000,000