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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

New to Investing, appreciation for startups. Background with Military, State Government, and Municipal Government. Private Investor.

$1,000 to $20,000

United States > California

Run a Retail Pharmacy and private clinical practice Pharmacist/Homeopathic Doctor Private investor

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > California

We have experience investing in and operating manufacturing companies, business service companies, and hospitality companies. We are looking for companies that already have cash flow and our looking for a partner to take their business to the next level.

$50,000 to $2,000,000

United States > California

I started my own company 12 years ago and have grown it into a successful multi-faceted corporation involved with manufacturing, retail and distribution of hobby game products. My main areas of expertise include business development, software development, retail, wholesale and finance.

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > Illinois

We are a group of Investors with 30 years experience in structured project finance. We are all entrepreneurs and business owners as well. We have funded projects from $1M up to $1B+. We are always looking for new projects with a strong resume and make sense.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I am interested in exploring various opportunities currently seeking capital.

$500,000 to $9,000,000,000

United States > California

My investment history is in real estate and stocks, I purchased my 1st home in 2017 in Arizona, and made 40% profit on it in 3 years. I then used those profits and invested in a 2nd home in San Diego. I have been investing in stocks and maintaining a 15% yearly rate of return, and have recently heavily invested in crypto currencies.

$1,000 to $75,000

United States > California

I work for a family-owned business in the medical industry and have helped it grow into a multi-million dollar profit company. Looking to transfer my success into other companies through financial support and new investments.

$0 to $30,000