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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

Have previously invested in Furniture, Consumer Goods, Lifestyle Products, Busniess Services and Printing. Seeking to diversify by taking smaller roles in multipe startups. 20+ years business management. Entreprenuerial and creative. Enjoy helping others create solutions. Experience negotiaing with CxO level people at Fortune 500 companies. Private investor.

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > California

Private investor. Per Communication with interested party.

$0 to $40,000

Netherlands > Naarden

We are an IT company from the Netherlands focusing on contracting, managed services and software development. With our venture lab for start-up ICT companies we are able to invest and provide support. We are looking for software/service related companies.

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

President and Founder of Southern California chapter of global investment community of accredited private equity angel investors, venture capitalists and corporate/institutional investors.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > California

Project Manager assigned as the Contracting Officer Representative to SSC Acquisitions and Financial Services, which services Assured Access to Space at Space Base Delta 3 in Los Angeles, California. My previous assignment was as Program Manager for the USSF-12 launch Ring and Ground System Integration and Test Lead, Space Test Program Long Duration Propulsive Evolved Expendable Launch Vehicle Secondary Payload Adapter for the Advanced Systems and Development Directorate, Kirtland Air Force Base (AFB), New Mexico. In this capacity, I led the Department of Defense Space Test Program spacecraft programmatics, finances, scheduling, launch campaign, cybersecurity, and communication security that ensures compliance for five spacecraft worth over one billion dollars. I also led a 42-member ground system test and integration team supporting inaugural missions on next-gen enterprise ground systems. Interested in private investment.

$1,000 to $20,000

United States > California

Entrepreneur/Business owner. Consultant. Investor. Looking for majority ownership investment opportunities in Southern California.

$100,000 to $250,000

United States > California

Private Investor who currently is the VP of Mergers and Acquisitions of a successful manufacturing company. Over the past years we have made several acquisitions as add-ons to our company and we are looking to expand our portfolio. Am also an active investor in the stock and bond markets as well as the residential and commercial real estate markets.

$0 to $15,000,000

United States > California

Past investment history includes Oil and Natural Gas investing and Real Estate sale and purchaces. Currently employed as a commercial insurance broker for global risk management firm. Interested in opportunities as private investor.

$20,000 to $80,000