California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > Illinois

More than 18 years of commercial real estate investment and development experience. Most recently VP at GE Real Estate Purchase single tenant office and industrial properties for my company's own account and commercial and hotel properties for other investors for whom I am an advisor.

$50,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

Electrical engineer with MBA. Owner of company offering manufacturing and industrial services. I am looking to Invest in different projects but must be for ONLY PROFITABLE PROJECTS, with current sales and profit of $400K USD per year or more. Projects that need to grow by increasing its current installed production capacity.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

As an investor, I bring not just capital, but deep operational and strategic insights drawn from years of experience in managing global supply chains and working at the cutting edge of innovative industries, like eVTOL. I have a solid understanding of what it takes to scale businesses efficiently, manage complex systems, and navigate challenges in fast-paced markets. My career has been centered around creating value, building strong teams, and driving innovation, which gives me a practical and hands-on perspective. I’m passionate about supporting founders who are solving meaningful problems, and I approach every partnership with a collaborative mindset. I’m here to help you navigate growth opportunities, anticipate challenges, and achieve sustainable success while respecting your vision for the business.

$0 to $30,000

United States > California

I am a securities transaction attorney. I have an extensive business and finance background. I do not invest in my own clients' deals so I am looking for places to invest to expand my personal portfolio

$10,000 to $150,000

United States > California

I am in the banking industry, specializing in asset valuation and risk management. I am interested in various areas of investment throughout the Southern California region.

$0 to $1,000,000

United States > California

Invested in startups going back to 1994, yahoo, mysimon, bluepumpkin, and currently invest in a few stealth startups. Back-ground consists of making sure that the entrepreneur is prepared to finish the job! I will test the courage of the entrepreneur a lot prior to investing in him or her! If you pass the courage test everything else should be fairly simple. Private investor and also a member of some Angel groups.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I am a registered professional civil engineer looking to invest my extra financial assets in promising businesses. I hold a bachelors degree in engineering from UC Irvine, and a masters degree in engineering from USC.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Nevada

President of a holdings company. Investor in many companies.

$25,000 to $100,000