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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

Intern at The Angels Forum and The Halo Fund.

$0 to $1,000,000

United States > California

I spent over 25 years in investment banking doing mergers and acquisitions and also complex financing transactions. A few years ago I began buying small companies for my own portfolio and recently set up my own fund to make non-control investments in small companies. I am keenly aware of the issues small business owners deal with when growing their businesses and I would be comfortable in a passive role or one in which I could also serve in an advisory capacity. Because of my background I am very comfortable with developing creative structures. I would be interested in deals with equity, debt or hybrid securities. I have a preference for investing in companies with strong growth potential. These could be start ups with growth concepts or existing companies leveraging a new concept. I would be very interested in helping existing companies with the structuring and financing of business acquisitions. I believe my background would be a value add in any deal

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

Organic entrepreneur with 25+ years of practical knowledge weaving through business growth. Consultative mindset to help spell out a vision for an audience. Experienced in building teams from Idea's to Launch. Managing teams to profit. Enjoys complicated challenges that have meaningful exits. Presently, participating in investor's due diligence, capital strategies, start up and middle market development and best practice business development strategies. Enjoying equity positions in a portfolio of 150 companies.

$25,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

experienced entrepreneur looking for new opportunities, specifically in the FILM/ ENTERTAINMENT areas.

$0 to $100,000

United States > California

27 year SVP commercial banker with prior business ownership / management experience. Private investor seeking established, growing and profitable business model.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > California

Oral and maxillofacial surgeon in private practice looking to diversify sources of potential income and have previously invested only in the financial markets.

$50,000 to $200,000

United States > Wyoming

Founder of D**** Infotech, Inc. I have 20 years experience in Sales and Marketing. Interested in investing or merger of the company with suitable partners.

$50,000 to $100,000

United States > California

Currently have investments outside of the US. Have recently relocated to the US and looking to establish a portfolio here. Experience primarily in IT and finance. Have founded a number of companies, advised numerous investment companies and invested in a number of successful ventures. Looking for good companies that I can not only invest in but hopefully also use my experience to add value to the relationship.

$0 to $2,000,000