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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

I have worked in finance for over 10 years and have 2 securities licensees which are a Series 6 and Series 63. I have worked in marketing of financial products/services as well as worked for start up firms. I have also started my own company 5 years ago in which most of my work is based online. I have worked with my fathers company and have access to some of the wealthiest families in the US (average net worth over $500 million) who are always looking for new, creative, alternative investments everyday. I have invested in my own business but would like to get in after the start up stage for a new investment opportunity after doing my own due diligence. I also dont just want to make money, I want to help the world be a better place at the same time. That is my mission.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > Virginia

I have invested in many companies over the years. Won some and lost on several but it is a numbers game. I look for strong management teams that listen to advisors well and know their marketplace. I also try to bring value to companies I invest in by helping companies identify and utilize leverage, build momentum in their marketplace and position the entities to maximize strategic resource and capital channels within the public markets if / when it makes sense.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

I am a Chartered accountant from India with 10 years experience in senior management in large companies around the world and have run my own IT services business for the past 25 years . Has done well and the company and myself have excess funds want to invest and take part time active role to help manage growth .

$500,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Oregon

I am employed by a capable International Funding Group offering excellent lending terms for Project Owner Loans on projects valued from $25 Million and up to $5B. No up front fees. Client should have equity in the project, and discretionary capital on hand. We prefer the profitable stage but will consider pre-Revenue stage and start-ups on a project by project basis. Please provide your Executive Summary or Power Point and Business Plan with all substantive documentations. We do not shop your private information or business plan, we are direct to our investors/funding source. Experienced, capable and honest people to work with. Feel free to contact me for further information and our Loan Application. The Lender pays my commission. Brokers should ask their Client for their commission to be charged as part of the loan expenses.

$25,000,000 to $5,000,000,000

United States > California

I have an extensive background and over 25 years of leadership experience in the IT industry, government and military, working at the director through c-suite level running businesses and the senior officer level in the military. I have experience as an entrepreneur in various sized companies, at all levels of leadership, in both the technology and financial services fields. I am looking for solid investments with motivated entrepreneurs, who can demonstrate a well thought out plan and have shown success.

$100 to $20,000

United States > California

Currently an entertainment professional at a major animation studio. Prior management experience in finance & marketing in the hi-tech, ecommerce, retail, and airline industries. Previously worked with an Angel Network and VC in Chicago before moving to Southern California. Current early investor in a $300M mens fashion ecommerce company.

$1 to $10,000

Netherlands > Almelo

I have done management consulting and capital raising for businesses (others as well as my own). I have an excellent network and have access to capital for projects. I am particularly interested in commercial grade renewable energy projects and have many resources in this sector. Although I live in Western Europe, I am interested in projects all over the world.

$100,000,000 to $9,000,000,000

United States > Oklahoma

Stocks, Real Estate Private Investor Senior Level Manager

$100 to $1,000,000