California Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

I co-founded Micro Center Computer Inc in 1990 and was a board member of Supermicro Computer which went to a successful IPO in 2007. Now Sam is focused on start-up company and investment. Sam has over 30 years of extensive background in development, engineering and business management and has been a successful engineer/manager/consultant/executive in several well- respected companies such as Sony, Fairchild, Telesensory, and Snap-on Diagnostics.

$20,000 to $300,000

United Arab Emirates > Dubai

12 years of experience in Financial/Banking sector of UAE. Currently a Mergers & Acquisition analyst.

$50,000 to $60,000

United States > California

Good Day! I am excited to be a part of this venue. I am a University of California Santa Cruz graduate with a political science degree and a law degree from Lincoln University. I am a non-attorney, JD who has owned a real estate investment company, and I have access to fund large-scale projects within certain industries. The funding I obtain requires no upfront fees whatsoever, however, your business plan and financial projections must be verified and accurate. In addition, you must have in-depth experience in the specific project for which you are seeking funding. I look forward to hearing from you.

$10,000,000 to $20,000,000

United States > California

We are a global holding company of Private Equity, foreign and domestic Funds in the business of deploying capital. Our Family of Funds have earned the reputation as a premier value added provider of capital. Our track record as an owner, lender and/or investor of real estate and securities has allowed us to create an unrivaled reputation for underwriting and understanding even the most complex of transactions. The firm is headquartered in Irvine, California and maintains offices throughout the US and internationally. In its principal and advising banking and investing capacity, focuses on providing financing for transactions in a wide range of corporate and real estate projects of all types, Including but not limited to, retail, entertainment, multi-family, industrial, office, hospitality, land, mobile home and mixed-use.

$1,000,000 to $20,000,000

Netherlands > Almelo

I have done management consulting and capital raising for businesses (others as well as my own). I have an excellent network and have access to capital for projects. I am particularly interested in commercial grade renewable energy projects and have many resources in this sector. Although I live in Western Europe, I am interested in projects all over the world.

$100,000,000 to $9,000,000,000

United States > California

I am an investor looking at around $50,000 to start and up to $100,000. This is cash available looking for an interesting, probably upstart company with a good idea who needs money to get going. My preference would be an investment with good return that has the possibility of rolling back over into the company for future development and returns. As further background, I am looking to invest in areas other than stocks, funds, etc. My net worth is approximately 1.4 million of which most is in land in Arkansas.

$0 to $100,000

United States > California

I have a small backround in stocks. I work in the entertainment industry. Private investor

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > California

I am a private investor with over 7 years of experience investing in start ups. I currently own a large consulting company and am an Entrepreneur and have made my personal money through investments in early stage companies.

$50,000 to $500,000