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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

We are an oportunistic debt financing firm with loans ranging from $500,000 - $10,000,000. We are a senior secured Asset Based Lender and are not governed by the FDIC. We make loan decisions quickly, and work with our clients on an ongoing basis.

$500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I am an successful entrepreneur and senior executive in the information technology area. I recently sold a company I helped build to a publicly traded company and I'm looking to support other organizations on a fast growth track. I am interested in high potential start-ups or early stage companies that need capital and, possibly, direct personal support.

$10,000 to $100,000

Singapore > Singapore

Fund was founded in 2018 has made 33 investments. We are a seed and early stage investment fund and venture builder. We focus on adding value to blockchain and emerging technology projects with real world applications. We aim to empower some of the most promising entrepreneurs with the resources to make their vision of blockchain in the global economy a reality. Managing partner is a Senior Blockchain Fellow at INSEAD and was recognized as a "Blockchain 100" Global Leader by Lattice80. Private investor.

$50,000 to $200,000

United States > Massachusetts

We are a privately held funding group that specializes in providing many forms of debt and equity financing for projects. With a direct connection to some of the wealthiest private investors, we are able to structure deals that quickly get your business up and running quickly. We provide funding from 1 to 100 million in the United States and internationally. We partner with our clients to provide the necessary equity to succeed. We pride ourselves in knowing what our clients need and finding ways to make deals work for everyone. With over 30 years on experience in real estate investing, construction, development, business management and project financing our services are unmatched. We have the ability to quickly evaluate projects and present our clients with multiple funding options for a mutually beneficial investment. Because we are a private money source and not a conventional bank this gives greater flexibility to financially invest in project

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I am a business owner with 10 plus years of active experience and I am now starting out as angle investor. I have a keen understanding of what small businesses need to succeed and I am willing to get involved with the right entrepreneur.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

I am direct investor and I syndicate with other lenders/investors that want to quickly fund your [reasonable] loan request, at competitive rates & terms. Based in Manhattan, New York City, with 25 years experience in business and real estate finance, I have developed the valuable banking, pension fund, insurance company, hedge fund, REIT and Wall Street and specialty lending relationships you need. I am confident that I have as principal and as a syndicator, the funds you need. You may be out looking for "Angels" where other specialty funding solutions may be more appropriate or can be used as a capital supplement. This is the value of what I can offer. I have many DIRECT hedge funds, private equity firms, REITS, investors with whom I work with, that can be made available.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Louisiana

I'm a long time entrepreneur with extensive experience in brand development and building new businesses. I am excited to invest and partner with new companies, new products, and newly formed inventive ideas.

$1 to $300,000

United States > California

Private investor with 5 years commercial real estate investment experience purchasing parking lots, garages, self storage, & industrial outdoor storage. Received recognition for parking lot investments and programs. Member of the Commercial Real Estate investment group. Access to over $150 million in capital from three sources.

$1 to $500,000