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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

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United States > California

I invest in all kind of assets, stocks, real estate, commodities and also recently invested in 2 restaurants. I have 20 years of investment banking experience.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > California

I represent multiple financing entities and am always looking for good deals!

$5,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Connecticut

I am a life long entrepreneur with many ties to the Angel community via legislation etc. I have owned businesses in wholesale/retail, hospitality and real estate and new media. I have also consulted to business's in health care and energy. My strenghs lie in marketing and sales, however, I am also very good at conceptualizing business and decision making. I have some very strong ties to the SBA program over a specific lender . My passion for small business has evolved to include my involvement on a national basis with the boards of WIPP< WBENC and the US Chamber council on small business

$40,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Nevada

I work with a private equity investment group located in Southern California. We are very interested in "green" technologies and have made recent investments in water purification and wind technologies. We prefer companies that have "disruptive" products or services regardless of industry. We are not geographically constrained and have done a number of deals outside the US. We prefer companies that already have revenue, but will consider start up projects with exceptional or unique IP's. Each project is considered on its own merits. After 15 years we have access to numerous resources with investment banks, broker dealers and other related resources. There are no fees or costs for the project company associated with our investment program. If you are seeking investment or expansion capital we would be interested in reviewing your project. I am the person responsible for the initial due diligence and financial analysis of projects for the investment group.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

United States > California

I have been an operating executive responsible for WW operations of several venture backed software companies with revenues exceeding $180M and 1,200 employees. My efforts have resulted in 2 IPOs and 8 acquisitions. I have raised more than $200M in venture capital and created more than $3B in market value. I work closely with founders and their boards on strategy, operating plans, and raising capital. I currently have relationships with 40+ venture firms for follow on rounds.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Illinois

We are an investment bank out of Scottsdale, Arizona. We work on two types of transactions. We do debt financing and equity funding for privately held, small to middle market companies. We also do mergers and acquuisitions, from an advisory standpoint whether it be from the buy of sell side.

$300,000 to $100,000,000

United States > California

Entrepreneur/Business owner. Consultant. Investor. Looking for majority ownership investment opportunities in Southern California.

$100,000 to $250,000

United States > Texas

I have been in the industry for more than 15 years. I have managed several start ups with millions of dollars in net worth.

$500,000 to $5,000,000